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So this is a song I wrote to the music of Burnin' Up by the Jonas Brothers. It's really different then what I usually write so could you please tell me what ya think ^_^
"I remember falling through the ice into the water beneath and how the excruciating cold seemed to slice through me like so many shards of frozen glass...."
It's meant to be the prologue for a story I am considering writing. Any advice, criticism would be appreciated! Basically, I'm wondering if you think it would be worth it to continue.
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